Category: Fantasy, Romance
Title: Feral Hearts
Author: RKP Hunt
Website: http://www.rkphunt.com/tales.html
Forum: http://rkphunt.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=9
Downloadable: No

Description: Akilah is a young tribes woman. Her culture believes that women should forage and have children. While the males hunt and try to seduce the women with meat. She doesn’t want any part of her people’s ways and wants to become the shaman.

After an encounter with the Exiles, which are males banned from the tribe, she is discovers that her sister and father are trying to bond her to one of the males. One without ranking. She must decided to become an outsider to her people or allow herself to be bonded to a male, which is not normal amongst her people.

Note: You may only read half of this 14,000 word story. The rest is on the forum and you must have a registered account and 10 posts in order to get access to the thread. Click here to visit the forum.

If you have read this story, please comment below… don’t forget to register or login first. Please use the forum link if you wish to discuss anything with the author.

There are errors in this novel, because it’s free and not completely proofread. If you can’t get past it then please don’t read it. I know they are there and they will be fixed in the distant future.

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myabbie1   |2010-04-20 06:08:57 i have ten post but cant find the rest of the story can yall tell me how to get there Reply | Quote 0   0

myabbie1   |2010-04-20 05:07:25 cant wait to read seems really good Reply | Quote 0   0

Anonymous   |2010-04-20 04:59:57 i cant wait either it seems like a great book i just made an account and working toward those 10 posts can wait to read it. i'm also writing a book even though it probibly will never be finished Reply | Quote 0   0

Anonymous   |2010-03-27 18:22:42 I started reading your story; Feral Hearts off of fictionpress. I can't wait till I post 10 posts to read the rest. Reply | Quote 0   0

charlie   |2010-03-27 15:22:35 Hi! I found your story on fic press listed as a favourite by someone who was reading my stories so I thought I'd check it out. I like the first part and hope to be able to read the end soon! Reply | Quote 0   0

Alii Franks   |2010-02-20 21:06:03 I've read your "Crimson Moon: Broken Toy" and I just couldn't stop reading and wanted to read more of your work. I thought I'd choose Feral Hearts and would like to read the full story. You noted that I would have to have ten posts to access the full story and I was wondering how I could do that? Because your blurb sounds interesting and I loved to carry on reading the completed work. Reply | Quote 0   0

Melusane   |2010-01-07 09:01:02 Is Feral hearts set in like prehistoric times, or an alternate universe? Someone made the comment that they would like more descriptions of the landscapes etc, which I thought was good idea, as it would anchor the story, it seems like it needs that extra element of geography or flora and fauna otherwise it seems to float a bit, and it's distracting from the plot and characters. Looking forward to reading some more. Reply | Quote 0   0

charlie   |2010-03-27 15:25:08 I agree. The first bit that I've read has led me to believe it is tropical due to the banana leaf hut but beyond that I'm not sure if it is an island or South America or???? Still it does leave the story open to interpretation which can be interesting. Reply | Quote 0   0

RHunt   |SAdministrator |2010-04-02 11:41:44 It's a fantasy land in a fantasy world. Since this is a short story my descriptions are intentionally underwhelming. I gave myself a word limit since this was meant to be the 10 post story only. Reply | Quote 0   0

Melusane   |2010-01-02 12:01:32 Aaaah, now I have to post to read the rest! The posting countdown begins! I'm hooked, and enjoying it. Can sort of see the character types that you like to write about popping up in alternate universe/prehistoric form in this story. Like, the girl is Madison/Bleu, the big guy with the meat is Lucian/Sam. So far, at least! Looking forward to the rest, and finally figuring out how to navigate around your site! Reply | Quote 0   0

LordDogma   |2009-03-07 13:37:08 I've read the story at Fictionpress and I've just reread it here. Still as good as the first time. A very attention getting story. Reply | Quote 1   0

devil53   |2008-07-20 00:48:01 I have enjoyed the part that I have read. I can not wait to see what happens next. Reply | Quote 0   0

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